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PostSubject: just last night   Tue Aug 25, 2009 3:42 pm

heres a poem i wrote when i was like 6:

i couldnt fall asleep last night
because the moon was much too bright
and while i was still wide awake
i cooked myself a juicy steak
and when i was done with my steak
i thought id jump into a lake
i swam in the lake for about an hour
and then i got a superpower
the power to fly fast and high
so high that i was in the sky
and then i had to save the town
and they gave me a golden crown
it all gave me quite a fright
and it all happened just last night
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PostSubject: Re: just last night   Tue Aug 25, 2009 4:04 pm

Huh. That has a very unique aspect. The childish theme is made beautiful by such a simple poem.

Bravo.

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PostSubject: Re: just last night   Tue Aug 25, 2009 7:59 pm

Dear god it's to good for words.( no sarcasm intended...ok maybe just a little)

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PostSubject: Re: just last night   Thu Aug 27, 2009 1:40 pm

i wrote it one morning when i was 6 and i was half asleep.

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PostSubject: Re: just last night   Fri Aug 28, 2009 5:38 pm

Sometimes youth produces the best literature.

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